My primary comment is that it seems the author wrote each scene after carefully describing absolutely every physical thing in the scene. Far too much minutiae - to the point that the storyline became muddled. It was not until the last 20% of the book that the story picked up. I was surprised to find out that this seemingly chick-lit novella turned into a vampire story. The product could have benefited from editing e.g. candelabra and candle bra are not the same thing.